Outline for 1st Draft

• Intro : 

1. Users of SNS are growing up

2. Cities tend to be lack of communication with the public.

- Do major or minor cities use network to promote their territory?
- Goyang si(Goyang town) has been used and developed own unique Twitter account and the account is good working. How about case of other cities or countries?
- City should promote themselves to grow up. but how?

Thesis : Cities should communicate to the public on network,especially SNS, to grow up.

• Body

 1st paragraph : the public who use SNS in major cities are increasing however cities are lack of communication with public by sns

'The world’s most active city in terms of posted tweets?   No, it’s not New York, Tokyo or London (though they’re all in the top 5). It’s Jakarta, Indonesia.   In addition to New York, Tokyo and London, Sao Paulo is in the top 5.'
- [The World's Most Active Twitter City? You Won't Guess It]


2nd paragraph : why should cities use sns for communication with the public?

- statics of 18-29 are growing up
-  Are businesses using social media to their advantage?
 http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/business-16333215


3rd paragraph : what's expected if cities use sns?

- easier and more comfortable communication with the public, especially the young.
- prompt action for solution
-and so on

• Conclusion

Cities should promote their social networking service for communication. Also, the account must be vitalized